Earlier this month when I was downtown photographing the Christmas be-bulbed trees along Main Street, I snapped this photo of a vintage fire truck, part of a passing procession I later learned was headed toward the funeral of a retired firefighter. When I composed the shot, the truck was perfectly centered in my viewscreen; by the time my digicam captured the image, though, the truck had moved off center.
Reviewing the photo when I got home, I considered cropping it, but something in me liked the off-center composition. At first, I thought it was the diagonal balance of truck and branching tree, but ultimately I decided that it was the sign for Earth Treasures, a downtown store selling beads, polished stones, and science-themed gifts and toys, that I found aesthetically pleasing. If I cropped the photo with the truck as its focus, I’d lose the sign. If I kept the photo as-is, I’d retain the visual trinity of truck, tree, and background facade.
Last night at the brink of sleep, I realized what I’d liked about that sign: Earth Treasures. The name of Keene’s local bead and trinket shop contains within it the English name of Ji Jang Bosal, also known as Jizo or Ksitigarbha, the “Earth Treasure” Bodhisattva whose name Buddhist mourners chant when a loved one dies. How fitting that my shutter-snapping eye instinctively knew to capture the accidental sight of a funeral-bound firetruck rolling past the Earth Treasure’s eye.
- This is the “November” image in my 2007 photo-calendar: an appropriate picture, perhaps, for the month of All Saints and All Souls. You can see the featured photos here, and you can order a copy here. Enjoy!
Nov 29, 2006 at 11:28 am
I like the composition very much, and love the serendipity of depicted event and store name/Buddhist reference.
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Nov 29, 2006 at 12:21 pm
that’s downright uncanny.
and – btw – welcome home!
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Nov 29, 2006 at 3:56 pm
I nearly always find that my successful shots are the ones where I took the background into account (though sometimes of course it’s pure serendipity, as here). I also tend to prefer the aesthetic effect of asymmetry, which leads me to suggest that this picture would still be effective if, instead of the sign, there had been some other eye-catching object there to complete the arrangement with truck and tree.
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Nov 29, 2006 at 4:55 pm
i’m a big fan of “as is” photography as well as cropping and Photoshop. Love to see pics of downtown Keene. Lorianne, your photos are always of interest!
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Nov 29, 2006 at 5:03 pm
** I’m also fond of the broken window in the brick building ** makes me happy 🙂 I miss seeing old mills and brickwork.
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Nov 29, 2006 at 6:49 pm
It also makes clear that the truck is driving out of the shot, “in motion” – which is what I first thought when you said it was off-center. So it worked for me on that level! I only noticed the Earth Treasures later. Guess it says something about the viewers.
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Nov 29, 2006 at 9:55 pm
Some other compositional comments: First, it is a wonderful shot. The combination of very prominent horizontal lines along with just enough vertical lines give the shot a lot of vitality.
Re the colors, the blue and green signs, as well as the truck are perfectly matched values. Notice the repeats of white areas (on the signs and at the front and back of the firetruck) that perfectly frame that center of interest. The muted tones of the tree leaves, the creme building and the bricks in the background all play nicely behind your tri-color foreground objects. The tree branch shadow pattern on the building adds a feeling of motion to the vehicle, as does the shadow under the firetruck. Each white mark on the street is pointing in the direction of the apparent motion of the firetruck.
One last thing – small details again emphasize that your center of interest is moving forward: the diagonal parking space street lines, and the diagonal branch shadows on the white building all converge at the front of the truck. That leads the object forward.
All these compositional elements make this photo your November calendar winner. TaDaa! Good work, Lorianne.
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Nov 29, 2006 at 10:44 pm
I like that the tree looks like it is growing out of the truck…
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